I am trying to get recognition as a poet songwriter. I would love for someone out there to read my material and tell me their thoughts. I am also working on some short story/novella material. Would love to hear some feedback, even if it is not positive. Thank you for your help and support.
If we have learned anything about life,
Why do we not see?
That we are missing out on everything.
Our lives are a precious thing,
Sacred in the eyes of the gods,
But we have made it a travesty.
The material things we hold dear,
Cars, cell phones and net gear,
Have made us lose ourselves,
And it is so sad n one can see it still.
Guess we will see it like all things when its to late